Date: September 25 2022 6:14 PM Title: Chapter Five, Above & Below
I don't know about other people but I'm still checking this daily for updates. Are you still working on this? It'd be a crying shame if not.
Author's Response:
Thanks for not forgetting about it! Not that I can blame anyone lol. Sorry, there was much much more going on in the past month than I was expecting. I am still writing and won't stop until I get the story finished. And more importantly, good. Future chapters will probably be coming out every other week at the earliest now. Sorry about the inconvenience!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2022 1:13 AM Title: Chapter Five, Above & Below
Looks like we're getting some escalation, as Juni's two sides are being brought together. I like how some of her darker nature slipped out and was picked up by Micha, when she was rather dismissive of the mini walk paths. I suppose this is foreshadowing something, a mounting confrontation. Still, it's nice to see that she's still sweet and caring towards her boyfriend, enough to defend him from unwanted aggression.
Also, really like the May character, and from the looks of it, we'll be seeing her again. It's just me, I like the sporty, professional archetype. She probably could use a Mini companion.
Look forward to more.
Author's Response:
mwahaha it's alll coming together...
I just realized this is the first chapter where all of the main characters are in the same space lol. But yes, I'm so excited to show you where we're heading. It'll be a ride for sure. Also you are definitely not alone about May, it's a fav type of mine too! Thanks so much for the review!