Date: August 04 2022 9:28 PM Title: Familiar Face... and mountains
Oh I REALLY hope Lacey gets her way!
Author's Response:
I can see why, it's a rather lewd idea, isn't it?
We'll see how it goes, I promise absolutely nothing. xD
[Report This]Date: July 31 2022 8:27 PM Title: Familiar Face... and mountains
When I am wrong I am wrong. And I can take joy in Lio, Ava and Rachel shenanigans regardless of any big conflict on the background.
Sorry if my last comment bothered you. You are not the first one to tell me I see conflict where there is none.
I am really enjoying your writtng and am gratefull you are sharing with us. And soon, Rachel's feets will be Lio's mountains XD
Author's Response:
No worries, just wanted to clear that up so you don't get the wrong idea.
Thanks for the kind words.
And indeed, soon they will be mountains. But it's not just Rachel, and not just her feet. ;P
[Report This]Date: July 30 2022 8:06 AM Title: Familiar Face... and mountains
Well-written story, with some nicely defined relationships at his former and slowly dwindling size. It’ll be interesting to see how those relationships manage to adapt to the micro sizes.
As a fan of the weird and quirky girls with a bustier physique, I’m already looking forward to reading more about how Jasmine would treat Lio as a speck.
And any kind of jewellery is always a good sign in these kinds of stories, so can’t wait to see how that plays out.
Good work so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliments! I value characters having personalities, so it's nice to hear I'm succeeding in that regard.
If you're a fan of those types of girls, then Jasmine truly is perfect for you. We'll see how it goes, but nothing's preventing you from thinking off your own ideas.
I like to inspire, it's satisfying. ;P
Date: July 29 2022 2:56 PM Title: Familiar Face... and mountains
I usually get impatient with these slow shrinking stories and just leave them alone for a while until enough chapters have been published to get to the small stuff. But there's something about the way you're writing this that's keeping my interest. I like Lio and I like all these girls, I wanna see them interact as normal sized people just as much as I wanna see them as giantesses. I think a lot of that can be credited to you giving them more than one note personalities. You could've easily just made Jasmine nothing but a popular it girl or Ava a stereotypical tomboy, but you did more than that. They all seem 3-dimensional with different qualities, and I'm interested in seeing how those qualities are gonna play out. This story has been really good so far, even without much shrinking.
Not say I'm not excited for the shrinking though, I'm hoping we get a shrink spurt sometime soon
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it so far!
My secret is.... I have no clue, I just wing it.
I try my best to give my characters at least a few personality traits, give them something to work with. Jasmine's an it-girl physically, but she's a bit weird so expectations are diverted. Ava's a tomboy but she's still feminine, and chose someone like Lio as her best friend. Rachel's a big sis through and through, but in both the protective and playful aspects.
We'll get to the Micro size eventually, got a few more ideas before we get there.
Date: July 29 2022 1:24 PM Title: Familiar Face... and mountains
This chapter was certainly interesting, I didn't expect Lio to give in to being handled by Lacey so easily if he has a history with her. I also didn't expect Jasmine to openly want to fuck him especially when she subtly aknowledged that she knows Ava has a thing for him. I can see this causing some nasty conflict between him and Ava if he chooses to take her up on that offer. I can't bare to see Ava hurt like that so I'll anxiously push forth. Can't deny it would be hot to see him on Jasmine but it would have terrible repercussions at least in my mind as a member of Team Ava.
Author's Response:
Lio agreed to give Lacey the chance to be a normal person and hanging out with her girlfriend around himself and Ava. Whether or not anything happens, that remains to be seen.
Your horny is taking over ;P. Jasmine has no true intentions to fuck Lio, she's just open to whatever. She did, however, offer the future Micro a landscape to explore, albeit without any spelunking down under.
Ava knows Jasmine is a weirdo. She also knows that she's not into men romantically. Basically, she knows the blonde's not even remotely a threat to her... friendship.... with Lio. Though she too keeps an eye on Lacey at all times, juuuuust in case.