[Report This]Date: October 20 2023 1:54 AM Title: Shrinking
Just wanted to pop in and say that I can't wait for the rollercoaster that will be season 2! Hope 2023 has been treating you well :)
Date: October 17 2022 11:42 PM Title: Shrinking
> The author begins with a spiel about how it started out as X but turned into Y
> The author knows how to use line spacing and indentation
> The dialogue didn't make me immediately close the tab
I have high hopes for this.
Author's Response:
Improper line spacing and indentation is a pet peeve I've learned to deal with it on this site but refuse to succumb to lol
[Report This]Date: September 16 2022 8:05 PM Title: Shrinking
Really enjoying it so far, you're really good at writing the characters in a way that make them feel real and fleshed out. Natalie's actions in making things worse for herself all the time can actually be frustrating at times but that's only because she acts the same way a typical teenage girl would in these situations.
Author's Response:
Haha yes she certainly has a knack for instigating. Let’s be real, teenage girls in general are basically insane. Natalie, in particular. Honestly they all need therapy 😂
[Report This]Date: September 14 2022 1:34 AM Title: Shrinking
Natalie is a cool character and I love how the story fits into the real world. The constant tension is harrowing. great job
Author's Response:
Ooh, I'm glad you think so, I just love her, I think she's super cool. I debated whether adding too much of the real world and backstory would drive readers away, but I personally enjoy getting to know the characters and their messed up relationships; I feel like it adds so much more depth when they're all tormenting the shit out of each other 😌
Date: August 31 2022 12:10 AM Title: Shrinking
I created an account (been a longtime lurker haha) just to say that I absolutely ADORE the dialogue and your style of writing. You can really feel the characters come to life! I can’t wait to read more on Friday :)
Author's Response:
Ooooh thank you so much!! Dialogue is most definitely one of my favorite parts of writing. I was a bit worried people would be reading through it on here, like, "Quit yammering and get to the action, already," so I'm glad to know it's appreciated.
As a fellow longtime lurker, let me just say I am grateful and honored that you created an account just to comment. I'm super excited to post the next chapter :) :) :)
Date: August 26 2022 8:37 PM Title: Shrinking
Great story! I love it so far. There really needs to be more M/f stories
Author's Response:
Agreeeed! That is my mission. Thanks, glad you like it!