[Report This]Date: September 23 2022 1:14 PM Title: Sardonic Retribution
Bruh, you just deafened your ex. Major L for you. But Natalie has cool healing powers now, does this mean she's invincible to Trev's abuse/mishandling? Would he use this to his advantage? 🤔 He's such a nice, understanding guy, so probably not :)
Is he planning on keeping his word about taking her to the hospital? Or it's just her still clinging to an empty promise?
But loved the dialogue and Trev's messed up vore fantasies alluding to his need for complete control that he really should be talking to a therapist about. (But loved your hypothetical vore descriptions and Trev spiraling from remorse to anger while completely unaware that Natalie's ~temporarily~ deaf)
Btw, have you thought about cross-posting this to ao3? They have a pretty decent sized collection of macro/micro stories that aren't fandom related.
Author's Response:
But it’s also like… who hasn’t at some point wished for deafness as a temporary relief from an ex’s incessant rambling, you know? And Trev would NEVER see the benefit of being able to further mishandle and abuse her without the burden of inflicting long term physical damage, how dare you even suggest it!
Do you suppose hypothetical Vore counts as Vore? I was sitting here staring at the tags, like, well he didn’t TECHNICALLY eat her… but he sure did think about it a lot and his morbid attention to detail certainly paints a picture 😂
I will check out ao3, thanks for the suggestion! I’m cross-posting a ~slightly~ edited down version on Wattpad (mostly just cut out all the juicy bits in the hamster loving scene lol) and I feel like it’s slowwwly gaining traction. I’m now up to SIX engaged readers (although I think one of them might be me) and somehow it’s number one in their macro category… I have literally no idea how their algorithms work to have made that happen but I’m pretty stoked 🤩