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Reviewer: jlgg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dean

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Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Unknown Victory

my last review didn't really capture my love for this tale, so I just wanted to leave a little more. this is a story I'll be coming back to for a while. I really love the concept behind it. the build and payoff are so good. I read the whole thing again today, every word, in one sitting. it's a very enjoyable read, and one I know I'll return to again. wonderful story. :)

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 8: Unknown Victory

Just skimmed through this again, as I do from time to time. Absolutely awesome. I love the scale!

Reviewer: team1223 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2010 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dean

Loved the unaware aspect. It seems like that kind of story writing has dried up some. However it's good to see it come back with a delicious finish.

I would love to see more stories like this and I'm sure others would agree!

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dean

Thanks for sharing this story, and glad that you took your time and didn't rush with it. :)

I was hoping that Dean would have been stepped on by Samantha, but this way is probably more humiliating (and painful; stomach acid) for him.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 8: Unknown Victory

It looks like the school will now have to call it "Samantha's List."

Seriously, though: thanks for sharing this. It was--for lack of a better term--absolutely great!

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 8: Unknown Victory

great story. it's a real pity that it'sover

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: Cliffhanger

awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sandwich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2010 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Dean

Really enjoying this. I know this is a fetish work, but the reader in me still feels that the boys, though maybe a little arrogant, don't really deserve to be so punished simply for trying hard and succeeding. I'm secretly hoping for a just ending where at least Dean survives, but alas, they're probably going to get eaten, and teh story will be excellent anyway.

Simply excellent writing. Some of your descriptions, whilst imaginative, seemed a little dubious, but the narrative is well planned and the setting (if you can call a toe a setting) excellently portrayed.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! This story is more about injustice, especially when I consider the motives of the girl with the garnet ring. I agree with your criticism of descriptions, it is the reason I have been struggling lately with the story; I am never happy with them. Hopefully I will get better, and I hope you enjoy the conclusion that will be forthcoming.

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: Cliffhanger

Doesn't look too good for our heros... what a cliffhan- oh, its the title. lawlz

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 7: Cliffhanger

Well, looks like Tia's about to have a meal, is what I got from the end of this chapter. Looking forward to the finale. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: Cliffhanger

Excellent! See you @ Chapter Ate.

Author's Response: Haha I love puns. How true, how true...

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2009 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6: Two to Go

Writer's Block... I can relate...

But when you get your inspiration back, I look forward to seeing how this ends. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2009 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Two to Go

That's the spirit, Leon. Never say "die!" Not until chapter 7, at any rate.

P.S.--thanks for updating this. Well worth the wait.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2009 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 5: Wild Ride

awesome story

Author's Response: So glad you like it, hope you dig the rest.

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wild Ride

Nice addition! :)

One jackass down, three to go? lol



Author's Response: Your enthusiasm gives me enthusiasm! Thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of this story...hopefully I can get another chapter done in the next week.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2009 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 5: Wild Ride

Awesome! One micro-dude down. Two to go.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2009 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: Wild Ride

P.S.---no apology necessary. I have the same trouble, occasionally, myself.

As do some of my reviewers. ;-D

Author's Response: Thank you, for the understanding and the constant reviews. Helps the motivation when you know someone is out there actually enjoying what you put out.

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2009 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Dean

Looking good so far. The guys must be so small, that they could probably survive being stepped on like that. Or maybe I'm getting a little ahead of myself...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2009 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Change of Scenery

My bad! I just now remembered that BBL used it as a link between "Parallels One" and "Parallels Two." But, those were sf stories. Yours is a fantasy about poetic justice (a la THE TWILIGHT ZONE).

In other words, this tale is still first rate.

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