Reviewer: greenpeon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2023 10:54 AM Title: Monday Morning

I understand it's a fetish story and common sense would only get in the way of the size shenanigans. But Tim and Natalie have me rolling my eyes at times.

Tim really needs to explain things to his mother more clearly. His situation would be resolved if he simply informed her that his aunt is intentionally threatening and abusing him. Natalie also wins parent of the year for being so instantly dismissive of her son's constant pleas. At the very least you'd think she'd verify the situation by setting up some secret nanny cams to check how her incredibly squishable son is being "looked after" while she's not around.

Anyway I assume his aunt is going to condition tiny Tim into an obedient and submissive slave before tricking or convincing his mother to get in on the action... perhaps over a few bottles of wine while she's tipsy and uninhibited. First by pressuring them into a few mother son foot rubs after a hard day in the lab. Or suggesting she keep Tim securely trapped in her stocking/panties/bra etc, instead of leaving him alone and unsupervised at night, or potentially wandering off and getting lost during the day. Before long his mother might start to question if she really wants to lose her obedient little toy, why keep working her ass off at the lab to find a cure?

Author's Response:

I understand your frustration concerning the plot, but this story is more focused on scenarios and shrunken interactions rather than plot or character development.

In the future, however, I really want to focus on fleshing out more realistic characters, but I also like the dynamic of one giantess being playful and threatening the shrunken character to ensure secrecy. I do appreciate you pointing it out, though, and I’ll try to make my other projects more believable in this aspect.

As for the “behavioral adjustment” Julia is promising, I’m hoping to have this become an integral component of the plot moving forward, and I’m going to make sure everything flows well during my final proofreads before I post them.

Thanks for the critique, and for the review.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 7:26 PM Title: Monday Morning

Interesting not a foot guy

Author's Response:

Well, I can guarantee not all the chapters will be foot focused, although most of them probably have a little foot stuff. I’d say, you might wait until about Tuesday through Thursday chapters, as they have other types of interactions other than feet.

But, maybe I do focus on feet a lot, even when I don’t intend to, and that might not be everyone’s cup of tea. I’ll certainly try to vary my interactions better going forward.