[Report This]Date: March 01 2023 1:42 PM Title: Tuesday Morning
I like this chapter. I like how Aunt Julia is starting to become more aggressive with her sexual behaviors. She knows how to use her body even if the other person is tiny. I wonder if she will find some way to blackmail Tim to be quiet about what she is doing. Offers a deal to make things better but records it to make Tim look bad.
I hope that she does more stuff with breasts. Maybe something with the nipple.
Author's Response:
First off, If I haven’t mentioned it before, I really like the trope of having a giant character being playful, overbearing, and/or aggressive towards a tiny individual, and I want Julia to become gradually more aggressive over time, but I also want this change to seem natural and not just jump to “cartoonishly evil”.
Secondly, I did have a critique about why Tim doesn’t just come out and tell Natalie about his treatment, so I will be really trying to develop the threats and blackmail aspects of the story moving forward to justify his silence. Hopefully, I can create something that will at least be somewhat believable.
While I hadn’t specifically considered nipple play in this story, I might be able to add something in.😉
In any case, thanks for reading; I appreciate the review!