[Report This]Date: April 07 2023 8:09 PM Title: Wednesday Evening
I always am excited when I see that a new chapter is posted. Any chance Tim may....get smaller 🤔
Author's Response: Well, all of the remaining shrinking formula is at his mother’s lab, and Tim hasn’t grown nor shrunk anymore since Sunday, so he’s probably staying one-inch tall for a while. Of course, if Natalie were to bring the formula home with her…
Date: April 04 2023 8:50 AM Title: Wednesday Evening
I thoroughly enjoyed the last part of this chapter, hopefully his aunts inhibitions were lowered by the toe-curling orgasm he delivered. I'd love to see her intentionally put him to use this way from now on...
One criticism I'd like to point out is that Tim's constant yelling of "AUNT JULIA HELP" gets very repetitive and a little annoying. Especially when he should know she's ignoring him and intentionally stuck him there in the first place.
Author's Response:
Oh, Aunt Julia’s inhibitions have definitely been lowered at this point…and she’s most certainly not done having fun just yet.
Furthermore, yes, I can certainly see how Tim’s complaints and shouts can get repetitive. I think they need to start out demanding, then get frantic and pleading, then basically just be screams of pain and not directed at anyone, so I think that’s how I might change this type of situation in the future.
Thanks for the critique!
Author's Response:
Oh, Aunt Julia’s inhibitions have definitely been lowered at this point…and she’s most certainly not done having fun just yet.
Furthermore, yes, I can certainly see how Tim’s complaints and shouts can get repetitive. I think they need to start out demanding, then get frantic and pleading, then basically just be screams of pain and not directed at anyone, so I think that’s how I might change this type of situation in the future.
Thanks for the critique!
[Report This]Date: April 03 2023 11:03 PM Title: Wednesday Evening
Amazing chapter! It was great how it went from aware to unaware and back to unaware.
It is neat to see the Aunt juggling between what is pushing it too far and what is okay for her to do him. Even what she might have thought was too far might be too tempting, wanting to draw it nearer to where she thinks it is okay. I hope there is more pussy where Tim pleases her more or she finds some way for him to stay inside her for a long period of time without dying.
Author's Response:
Yes, I actually like going from aware to unaware in certain situations as a way of showing a playful giantess taking things too far. I really wanted Julia’s character to start out being playfully dominant, then escalate things as she explores all the fun she can have with a one-inch-tall character.
There’s still more fun to be had, so keep checking back for new chapters!