Leaving this review in lieu of being able to DM, and I don't think Shrinker82 is on the discord?

In response to the other replies.

To Red536, good to know your review wasn't deleted. 

And to Shrinker82, sorry for jumping to the accusation that you had (I have seen on this site and others, reviews that were purposefully deleted from content for being critical, but still sorry for jumping to that conclusion so abruptly)

I want to make it clear, I don't 'dislike' or hate bad ends, or ones where the main character isn't given a happy ending. 

I just think the story should follow some semblance of continuity, especially with characterization, size-erotica or not, I think if a person is presented one way (and shows no signs of changing from that characterization in any major way) they should be held to that same characterization.

I mean unless there's a shock/twist reveal (like this loving/kind character is secretly a serial killer, but keeps it under wraps, etc)

I just felt that Natalie wasn't shown to be someone who would be A) on board with her son's treatment at her sisters hands, or B) continue it/agree with her after learning the truth, as Shrinker82 had not written her in any way showing herself being open to such things.

Now if you *had* peppered in moments, as you said, of Natalie getting stressed out and anxiety ridden, and all the hard work she's putting into things, and the added personal pressure of it being her son on the line here, and maybe a few moments of her imagining him tiny at their feet rubbing them with Jules, etc. Or writing in Jules over time working on Natalie, hitting her weak points and slowly making her more and more ok with treating Tim like that.

I feel it would have made the final pay off here more palatable. (again some people may disagree and just say "oh this is just size erotica, don't take it so seriously.")

But the quality you presented here I feel is important, you wrote the content well, and I feel that a certain standard was set due to that good quality writing, that the characterization should also be upheld in the same regard. (Sorry if my earlier review may have come off as overly negative, I just feel after all that reading, the payoff wasn't handled well) 

And if this is the ending you always had planned, go with it, by all means. It's just I think this ending could have been set up more, or laying the groundwork for it more so on Natalie's end as said above, and thus her agreeing to keep him small and subservient, would have been more in fitting. 

I am interested in where a epilogue would take the characters, as well as were a potential sequel could be handled. 

So Julia knows where Tim is. But she also invoked Murphy's law when she thought that last line. I wonder if Tim will escape by getting out from under his mom without Julie seeing or by getting sucked into his mom's butt so Julie thinks there is nothing left.