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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09 2023 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

Seems the boss is now insect food; wait until an arachnid or Lady Bug finds him.  Surprising ending, I was sure Andrea was behind it all {perhaps she was} though it now seems he was just a rude, paranoid boss and Andrea a faithful and capable employee.  Who knows for certain.

Very nice story, well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Now that the story is over I can tell you that Andrea was not the culprit. She is as good a person, despite being a criminal. The Boss simply projected his insecurities and worries onto her. He couldn't accept the idea that he was the cause of all his misfortune.

Reviewer: ReaperFace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2023 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

The tone and description in this is great! Andrea deciding not to hurt him at all the end is somehow more humiliating...

Author's Response:

That was what I was going for. Glad it worked out :)

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