Date: August 23 2023 10:43 PM Title: Goin' Back to Cali
Great ending to the story! Glad to see the how the government investigation turned out and the connections to the other stories you've written. Excited for the epilogue and whatever you have coming next. Can we get some more detail about what Agent Warren went through?
Author's Response:
Yeah the epilogue I will warn will be a bit more on the shorter side, I will say. I'll probably break my rule with it being less than 3000 with this story, but still pretty lengthy. We'll see. Agent Warren is actually the protagonist of First Date a story I did around this time two years ago that was somewhat of continuation of Glory Days, with Agent Warren (Brandon) being the son of Ben from Glory Days and I mention him in here with the whole "missing dad" scenario he talked about. And First Date is somewhat a continuation of Shrunk Abroad too with Molly being in there as one of the main characters.
So Agent Warren's backstory and everything is in First Date, and you're gonna wanna read Glory Days to get a understanding on it a little bit as well too with the characters that's mentioned in the flashback like Howard and his mom and sister and his life. He's one of the Protagonists that I introduced later on in the next to last chapter. I'll talk more about my future in writing on here and everything in the story notes of the Epilogue.
Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad to hear you like the ending. I really tried to tie up all loose ends with this one, since this is my big story to kinda tie everything else I've written together up to this point. And a little fun fact for you guys as well too, that whole "shrunken person found in car accident autopsy in 2001" thing that Agent Warren mentions is a reference to a story I wrote right before "Blast from The Past" that I deleted because I felt like it wasn't on a good path. That being another connection right there that I snuck in, to tie in and I wonder how many people actually got it, probably very few to none.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2023 10:09 PM Title: Goin' Back to Cali
Great story, even though I've never been much into unaware vore, your style of writing sucked me in. You have an eye for the details that don't matter much, but add a lot of character and personality, I like it.
Question though; why were they worried about getting discovered when shrunken? Whether outside Michelle's stomach or inside. I guess all the characters have experience already being swallowed and so aren't too afraid of going through the digestion system, but surely it would be better to have her discover them rather than praying and getting lucky that she's a gross slob that doesn't flush or wash her hands? I guess they're just really terrified of being turned over to the government? Would Michelle or her friends have turned them in?
P.S: I love Michelle. Nasty bitch haha.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're enjoying it despite it being something usually don't look into and I always really try to pay attention to details in my writings in the like, gives it much more of a visionary flair to it and a bit more "realisticness" to it as well. The reason why they rather not get discovered by anybody is due to the fact that they don't wanna get tested on if they get handed over to the government, and all the things like that as well too.
I think Michelle and her friends would probably freakout to some extent if she discovered them and probably accidentally kill them in some way as they're reacting(like accidentally stepping on them or crushing them in some sorta way that's hard enough to kill them despite everything else they've been through), since Jack Cooper (the guy who's famous for being shrunken in this world) is the only person who's known for being that size. I feel like if Michelle saw them in the toilet, she'd probably accidentally flush them down as a reaction.
I won't go too much into this governmental stuff since I have something planned for it later on, but this whole thing will be expanded on much more later on in the story.
Date: April 04 2023 4:50 PM Title: Goin' Back to Cali
I’ve been reading your stories since the beginning and as an unaware vore fan, I’ve been amazed at every turn. I know this is the last of the series but is it the last of your stories ever? If so it’ll be sad to see you go, but nonetheless I look forward to seeing what you got in store for this one.
Author's Response:
No it's not the last one ever, but it pretty much ties up and serves a little as a finale to Matt, Tony, and Dave. I'll probably do more one-offs with different characters though after this one, and you'll totally see why. Glad to hear you've been following me since Just like The Movies or Blast from the Past. And you guys are in for a treat, I'm really going to flesh the chapters more out than I have in the past, since it's more of a finale.