Date: May 04 2023 1:24 AM Title: Life's a Beach
Really liking this story where all the earlier protagonists have come together. The unaware vore this chapter was nice too, I'm hoping they go all the way through Michelle.
I also like Nicole quite a lot, you've done a good job introducing her and showing the relationship between her and Matt. I'm also hopong there will be some good interaction between her and Matt while he's shrunk.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you guys are going to be in for a treat next chapter for sure. I tried to base Nicole and Matt's relationship on y'know, just realistic husband and wife talk as I do similarly with just realistic dialog with characters in general and to show they've got a bit of history together throughout the years. I really try to make my characters feel human and as if they're actual everyday people and not just a vehicle for fetish material.
Date: May 03 2023 4:32 PM Title: Life's a Beach
I do like a decent sized chapter, as long as it isn’t too short. Can’t wait to see the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah I tried to make it more on the longer side for this story that I'm doing, since it ties up all the other ones that I've done.