[Report This]Date: July 12 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 16 can’t be the end. The cliffhanger is too great. Why is Sarah “smirking” when she says she won’t let Jake’s dick get too close to her husband? The readers need to know!! Amazing story.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2023 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 16 can’t be the end. The cliffhanger is too great. Why is Sarah “smirking” when she says she won’t let Jake’s dick get too close to her husband? The readers need to know!! Amazing story.
Date: July 10 2023 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was the best story I read on this site. I would like to see a story with Starr where she doesn’t return the man.
Date: July 10 2023 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was the best story I read on this site. I would like to see a story with Starr where she doesn’t return the man.
Date: July 07 2023 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
This so far has been the best story I read on this site. Wish I could get an image of Starr next chapter tho cause she the best character.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dialogue? Perfect. Especially the chuckling when it was suggested Mike would be placed back on the tits. Tantalizing— the laughter did not need to be explored.
This is such a great story. I hope Mike starts with the a usive language. His complete clulessness is so entertaining.
I wonder why Jake wants to ask Mike himself?
Date: June 20 2023 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn man - your stories keep on getting better and better.
It'd be cool if Starr finds Mike (maybe he tries to climb her) without Maggie knowing and decided to tease/torture him, causing him to shrink even more..
Either way, I'm sure whatever you have in store will be great!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2023 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story!!! Literally on the edge of my seat reading this! If you are looking for suggestions some unaware time on the babysitters ass would be incredible! Honestly aware would be cool too. But I'm sure what ever you decide to do it will be amazing!! Love the work
Date: June 19 2023 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am absolutely in love with this story! I’m a huge vore fan and I know I don’t see the tag for it, but man you do such a good job with the teasing!! I would love to see something unaware/aware by one of the characters or the daughter being persuaded into eating him by the babysitter. But it’s your story and you obviously are going the route that you love and I know I will love this story regardless. Keep up the amazing work!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2023 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. I definitely think that Mike still hasn't realized how little control he has right now. I think his wife still cares about him in some way although he's not much use to her now as anything more than an amusing toy or pet. I second what miniscule said in that I think more humiliation is in order with Jake. Who knows, she could even offer him to the babysitter to keep, completely unaware of the babysitters disdain for Mike.
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: May 25 2023 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
The story gets better and better. Hopefully, it goes on a little longer. Mike being hit by a boatload of semen while trying to get Sarah's attention was amazing. Sarah's thoughts inside the shower about her power compared to Mike, about how Jake's cock is so much bigger than Mike's entire body, is a great intro into Sarah descending into more darkness.
Since you want advice on where to take this, I'll throw down. Sarah gets tired of Mike's insults and obscenities. She tells Mike that she is going to punish him by making him an unwilling participant in her sexual interactions with Jake. Mike, ever clueless about his lack of agency, continues to verbally abuse Sarah. Once Jake arrives, Sarah places Mike in a shot glass and jerks off Jake, who unloads into that shot glass. What would Mike's thoughts will be as Sarah aims the cock in his direction? What does Jake think of all this?
Maybe Mike will learn not to be so insulting.
Date: May 13 2023 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like the story overall but I think the daughter should be left out of it
Date: April 21 2023 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see the Jake thing slow played…maybe mike can help but mention it a few times n his wife is trying to put it out of her mind but the more Mike reminds her the more curious she is to see it again…just my thoughts…I love the whole story and that was a fun twist very fun
[Report This]Date: April 19 2023 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love It!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 18 2023 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excelente historia bro, continue y no se rinda
Author's Response:
Gracias!
Date: April 15 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, really love the dynamics to this story! Definitely would like to see more of Starr!
Author's Response:
She'll come back after a few more chapters and there will be alot of her at that point