Date: February 25 2024 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Part 5
Nice story so far; but what about the present day hikers? What is happening to them, if anything?
Could use a little more past and present story line like the earlier chapters, as opposed to just the past chapters. That is unless the past is going to crash upon the future.
Regardless of the time continuum, this is a really interesting and intriguing story which is very entertaining to read. Please continue and keep up the great work.
BTW, it was King Arthur's father Uther Pendragon who started all the fooling around with various relatives and other men's wifes. Perhaps his sins should be called out as a root of betrayal in your story.
Author's Response:
Hi there, thank you for your feedback, as always you provide very thoughtful and detailed feedback which is thought provoking and interesting perspectives.
There will be more back and forth with the hikers, and yes its going to start building to something.
Thanks for your ideas, I wasn't done with King Arthur and his kin just yet, I think I had some slightly different ideas but I like your thoughts and approach; that's very interesting!
Glad you are enjoying this story, I quite like the variation in writing something quite different to the norm...
Wish you well and hope you continue to enjoy and support my work
Rich