Date: December 06 2023 2:19 AM Title: That doesn't fit there
That was intense and kind of sad. I think the scene was really well-written, but I found it surprisingly hard to connect with a domination scene where the dominant person isn’t into it. I think it worked best at the end when Mary directly orders him to destroy Julia’s corpse, involving herself in the action instead of lurking.
Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Any new stories in the works?
[Report This]Date: November 29 2023 3:18 AM Title: That doesn't fit there
Well hell things went south for Vic didn't they.
I mean he's not dead but from the sounds of it he's on the verge of it with one wrong move.
Author's Response:
The little guy has to face the consequences of his actions. Maybe Victor just wanted to be a good man by trying to get Mary to torture and murder less during her games, but as we saw with Francis, those who want to be "a good man" don't always end well.