[Report This]Date: October 29 2023 4:37 AM Title: Few Good Decisions
I was hoping Noah would stay as a mouse girl longer or be tricked and unable to turn back but it was a nice end to to the story. Thank you for the story
Author's Response:
Thank you! In Part 2, I am planning to include more Naomi scenes + other animal girl transformations. They seemed to be popular in the story.
Date: October 21 2023 7:44 PM Title: Somethin' Stupid
Aww, I was hoping Noah would stay Naomi.
Author's Response:
I have noticed that the Naomi part was a lot more popular than I had expected, haha!
In this particular story, I intended the TF element to just be a plot point. I might write a story fully focused on TF in the future.
Date: October 06 2023 10:40 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips
good story i like it.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2023 8:29 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips
This story has gotten better over the chapters. Thank You
Date: September 24 2023 7:30 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips
Nice, so Naomi, Tanji, and Tamiko got captured. Is it bad that I hope Tanji escapes and saves Naomi by carrying Naomi in her stomach? Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2023 4:10 AM Title: Lack of Turbulence
Nice. Thank you for the chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2023 7:21 PM Title: All Of The Pills
I really like Noah being transformed and am looking forward to more
Author's Response:
I was considering doing just a fade to black with the transformation scene, but I am glad that I decided to write it out.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2023 9:30 AM Title: Broken Doll
I like to see all womem become huge and sexy amazons especially moms.