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Reviewer: shadowguy015 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2023 10:40 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips

good story i like it.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2023 8:29 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips

This story has gotten better over the chapters.  Thank You

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2023 7:30 PM Title: Thin Silver Strips

Nice, so Naomi, Tanji, and Tamiko got captured. Is it bad that I hope Tanji escapes and saves Naomi by carrying Naomi in her stomach? Looking forward to the next chapter.

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