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Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

The uncertainties in this chapter, the way Matthew is lost in a world of just him and the girl, and the way she verbally plays with him (like a cat with a mouse) all adds up to a thoroughly captivating chapter. I was so glad you'd already loaded ch5&6 too, after I read this.

Author's Response:

I have deliberately left him in a world of uncertainty the truth still unknown,his future soon to be revealed.

Amanda.

Reviewer: yummy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

Excellent!  You have my full attention (in more ways than one).

Author's Response:

Thank you yummy the  stories direction is changing constantly i have some many avenues in which i can turn to tease and torment Mathew i am not sure myself wich path i shall take.

Thank you for your kind words xx.

Amanda.

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