[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - All for What?
That was so cool! I loved the battle between Maggie and the navy ships with her simultaneously using her upper body and legs to kick and crush the ships while treading water, she must be far from shore for the water to be that deep.
It is good that you showed her gradually getting injured by the frequent weapon fire since it shows that while she is colossal she is not invincible.
I liked how she returned back to normal size and reduced her status to the same level of inferiority as the people she killed earlier. Seeing the blood guts and carnage close up is what I think caused her to feel guilt as she didn't really understand the full gravity of what she did when she was titanic.
Also describing the feeling of bodies popping under her bare feet was the icing on the cake...
Author's Response:
Thank you LittleBigPlanet! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter specifically. Yeah, she would have to be pretty far out in the water. I don't know the exact math of how far she could swim, but I tried to make it entertaining at least.
Yeah, I didn't want an invincible giantess, honestly, a couple more successful hits from the missiles and she probably would have died in my mind, but of course, I have to write the ending I planned.
Thank you for your support and reviews on this story, I really appreciate it.