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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2024 7:04 AM Title: Epilogue

I really liked this epilogue chapter. It's a neat kind of aftermath thing we don't ever really see in these types of stories and I feel it's pretty close to reality. It was a dynamic look into the actual world Maggie was destroying and how they dealt with what she left behind. 

Very much also enjoyed getting to see you write at a smaller size and hope to see it again sometime in the future.

Also, might only be me, but it's kind of refreshing to actually see for once comeuppance befall a giantess who engaged in mindless wanton murder and indiscriminate slaughter. Kind of ties everything together. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I actually almost didn't add an epilogue chapter, it was a super last minute idea I had and I'm glad I did because it really became my favorite part of writing this whole story.  It's how I think something like this type of disaster would be remembered in real life, or as close to possible as it could be, I suppose. 

I will continue to write shorter stories here and there. I have tons and tons of ideas that I need to get out of my head and I hope to keep sharing them with everyone.  Glad you liked how it ended!

Reviewer: Schoolgirlshoes Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2024 12:27 AM Title: Epilogue

This is such an interesting idea and very good story telling. Probably the first ever giantess story I have no intention on fapping to (due to the violence, blood and gorwe) but still keep on reading! Never thought that would be possible!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you were able to continue reading despite the violence.  I appreciate your support!

Reviewer: Kamaeli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2024 8:13 AM Title: Epilogue

Relatively short and not-so-sweet, but another good one to add to your library nonetheless.

I think maybe one of your biggest strengths as a writer is how "realistic" and believable you write your stories, from how your characters act and think to the way that the world would react to something like this. At least as much as it can be done in stories of this nature. The series of emotions and thoughts going through Maggie's head, the various survivors' accounts of the disaster, the mother defending her character, the people seeking to profit from turning it into an inaccurate movie and the ones selling merchandise, the attitudes of the students that were more interested in lunch than this world-changing historical event. All the stuff like this really brings it all together and makes it stand above the rest to me (this comment applies to the Incident stories, too). Really well done. The main chapters were good, don't get me wrong, but I may have enjoyed the epilogue the most.

I enjoyed the little surprise at the end. And I liked the bit with Zach's theory on why it all happened. I'm not sure if it was intentional but personally his answer is enough to satisfy my headcanon regarding the same topic in this story as well as your others.

The "playful-and-destructive untouchable goddess who is actually a regular person" theme that I consider to be kind of a signature thing of yours is the best genre there is (my opinion of course, lol), but it's nice to see you venture into other territory while still maintaining the writing quality you're known for.

While maybe I'm in the minority when I say that her size in relation to the rest of the world is actually "too small" for my tastes, haha, you continue again to keep me drawn to the stories you're creating. Real good job, my guy 👍



Author's Response:

Short and not so sweet is right lol

Thank you so much for saying that.  One of my biggest goals when I'm writing is that I want at least some relevancy to my characters or the world having an element of being realistic.  Or rather, as realistic you can have in this type of fantasy.  I want to write how I think someone would actually react.  That's why writing this ending was one of my favorite things because I think this is how a "disaster" like this would actually be remembered, much like in the real world. 

Yeah, Zach's take on it largely represents my own thought of "shit happens" and that's just how it is.

My favorite type of character to write is that regular person gets a bunch of power.  I would really hope it would kind of end up as my signature in a way, but I know so many other writers who are doing it well too!  I appreciate the faith in me to keep it up. 

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2024 5:23 AM Title: Epilogue

Just finished this tonight. Boy, what a fun read this was. Did not expect the ending! Well done, my friend. And the violence was *chefs kiss* You should write more short stories like this when you're taking breaks from your big epics.

Author's Response:

Thank you carnage!  I'm a big fan of your writing so I always love when you approve of my violence.  I was really hoping this ending would do well, ending stories is the hardest thing I've had to do when writing. 

Reviewer: Leedor MNL Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2024 1:46 AM Title: Epilogue

hooray, I really liked how things ended in a fatal way for Meggie since you did justice with her dying in the end, and I don't feel any sympathy for her, I say the damn thing. She deserved it and I loved the tragic ending she had after meeting her dog, since it would be an injustice if she had escaped after everything she did, thank goodness it didn't happen like that,Her mistake was leaving that soldier who betrayed her alive. Well, they should thank him and give him an award because he did what needed to be done, so that the long-awaited justice and death for Maggie I fell on her hehe yesss very good 



Author's Response:

Hooray indeed.  I don't think anyone should feel sympathy for her.  This was my plan before I even wrote the story.  Thank you for enjoying it!

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