[Report This]Date: January 22 2012 11:22 PM Title: Episode VIII: New Friends?
cant believe this was updated so quickly. this chapter was great. stephanie is finally coming along. an i guess my suspicions were confirmed about jane though. cant say as i blame her though.(just wish she was upfront with jerry about it, an maybe this will bring stephanie an jerry closer)
an it was cool an unexpected that brad would save kelly like that.
well when you post the other chapter i hope to see more of jane.
aaron
ps i guess jerry's finally putting it together about jane as well..
would be cool if instead of carrie escaping or being freed by becca/kelly, that she would be rescued by stephanie(i know its far fetched an unlikely but its a possibility)
Author's Response:
Yeah, It seems like Jane has been MIA for a while, but in story chronological time she hasn't been away from Jerry for that long. In fact, the last seven updates have taken less than a day of in story time. The Jane and Jerry situation could take a couple of routes and as I am making it up on the fly I don't even know how it will come out. This same uncertainty applies everywhere really, but I think it’s a definite possibility that Stephanie will come into contact with our new characters (Becca/Kelly) at some point. Thanks for reading and commenting.
minuss