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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 12: Captured by Lila

Close to the sixth anniversary of the promise you made in the chapter end note. And, still nothing?

For shame, dude!

Reviewer: Bellyacher Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 12: Captured by Lila

I've read all 12 chapters of this, and it's not bad. I kinda find myself craving more detail and elaboration on some things, and I can't figure out why Alyssa didn't just change Nate to normal size... I thought she was supposed to be one of the good characters.  Well, just the same, the story is pretty readable and fun, and I hope you decide to finish it, because it is pretty good overall.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 12: Captured by Lila

We'll hold you to that, dude!
This chapter was the best one, yet.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 12: Captured by Lila

damn, you write fast. great chapter as well. hope lila does come back to try an capture him, and does lila get ahold of the shrink 'thingy', hope so :P

ps love the depth this story has

aaron

Author's Response: Thanks! lol I do. xD And we'll see!

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