Reviews For Angel of Death
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2011 7:46 AM Title: Angel of Death

You've got an interesting concept here although I would have thought Angel (a very nice choice of name by the way but also rather ironic) would be nicer to the people of her adoptive country (in other words thankful that she got removed from proverty in Liberia). You really should paragraph your story more effectivly too by break up some of the text to make your story easier to read.

I was viewing my statisitcs and noticed I was in your favourites so that's how I fond you. If you need any advice just send me a message and I'll reply as soon as I can. Glad you enjoy my stories. :D

Reviewer: Big Z Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2010 11:40 PM Title: Angel of Death

This story strikes a perfect balance between explicit content and great writing. Angel's personality is also very believable, albeit greatly exaggerated.

Reviewer: Ameeba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2010 8:20 PM Title: Angel of Death

Very good, but space it better.

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