[Report This]Date: September 27 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. the characters, the plot and the snobby daughter taking over her parent's lives lol awesome! Will there be anymore to this story?
Author's Response:
Yeah, i have several chapters planned, i just got busy with life. I'm back to hopefully finish this.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh, thats what it looks like, lol. for some weird ridiculous(stupid) reason i thought that the crop hairstyle was like a crewcut... god i feel like such a jackass...
ps that is a very cute and attractive hairstyle(changes what i had originally thought of chelsea)
[Report This]Date: June 28 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
im actually starting to see things through katherine/chelsea perspective, which makes this story that much more realistic. thanks for posting it.
aaron
Date: June 25 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ps did you get the message I sent you?
Author's Response: i dont think so, try emailing it to me at invisibleink2011@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: June 13 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving where this is going. Highly intrigued at the Couples tag... so few authors willing to tackle such a task. You've inspired me to go back to work on my own story. Keep up the excellent work! I look forward to what's coming and extremely appreciate the quality of what's been written so far!
Author's Response: Thanks shadowcross. I'm flattered by the response. I figured the couples tag would scare people away so the reaction is quite surprising. Especially for my first work.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is my favorite current story. You write very well, and the plot is building nicely. Anxiously awaiting further chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments on my writing and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. It is alot of fun to write.
Date: June 08 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice theme hope to hear more.
Author's Response: You will definitely hear more.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far! Unlike the previous reviewer I hope she's emo or goth ;)
Author's Response: Thanks weary traveler. I'm not totally sure what defines someone as emo, so i can't really say shes emo or not as i'm not sure what quantifies one as EMO.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
likewise, like where this is going. have a thought, is katherine an emo kid?(hope not but we'll see)
anyways, great dialog, and characters have a realism to them that i admire.
ps do will you take requests for this tale?
aaron
Author's Response: if you have idea's or things you want to see you can suggest them. I wont guarantee they will make it into the story. However, requesting or suggesting an idea definately cant hurt the odds of something getting in. I'm glad you like the characters. That is one thing i was working the hardest on.
Date: June 07 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start and I like where this is going! The father is a bit naive of the situation... poor guy doesn't realize his daughter may just do what she wants now that her parents can't do a thing about it.
Author's Response: Thanks, i was trying to establish real characters, the father is a bit naive he has that kind of ignorance is bliss attitude. I have feeling your premonition is going to come true.