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Reviewer: ArtimusG Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Midnight Snack III

I was really hoping for a nice little ending, where the protagonist ends up swallowed alive, but, maybe that's a little far.  Oh well, this series of chapters is my favorite out of the story.  Very well done!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Handling It I

great ending... loved it. love this whole story and how it tells the lives of different people and there experiences. the story is very cohesive.

aaron

ps liked the ending to this chapter so much i guess cause im a sucker for cliffhangers... and that was a lulu.

thanks jude this story is much appreciated.

Reviewer: bubsboy81 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

I love the whole premise of this story, especially the smuggling sections. Very well written, I hope you complete the story soon!



Author's Response: I'll be working on the next set of chapters in the coming days, hope you enjoy them!

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

This has my vote for favorite new story. I feel like I've been waiting a long time for this...keep it up!

Author's Response: thanks a lot, sorry if I've been keeping you waiting for a longer time though!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: Strictly Business I

Now this tale is getting very interesting. Cannot wait to see where you take this incredibly imaginative story. Loved all of it.

Aaron

Author's Response: hey man, thanks for the continued support..so I'm about to go on another writing streak, hope you enjoy the rest of the story..

Reviewer: El-Kabong Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Good stuff!

Author's Response: thanks! =)

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Really awsome! some of the best stories I have seen in a while!! going to add you to my faves!

Author's Response: thanks a lot man, I've got a few ideas that are begging to be written..will be putting them down in the coming chapters

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Absolutely love this story! Really good unaware action and great descriptions! Please keep going!

Author's Response: glad to know you like it mate, I loved reading your stories too, best plots I've ever come across..looking forward to your next one!

Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Parents I

This has been my favorite chapter so far.  I've been a longtime fan of unaware, and I've always wanted to read a story with this particular scenario.  You're really good at creating a sense of impending doom and fitting a lot of tense descriptions into a small amount of text.  Really looking forward to the coming chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, I hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters then, because I too am a fan of this scenario!

Reviewer: Comix Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Erotica shouldn't make me hate everyone.



Author's Response: does it?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Parents I

bravo. chapter 10 was spectacular! it was incredible riveting. loved it. i am now a fan of this tale. well done

aaron

ps hope the cory and allison get anna's attention. also, thought that the detailed demise of patrick was astounding... and well toe-rific(sorry thats lame)

Author's Response: hey man, thanks for the continued support..I've got quite a bit planned for cory and allison..been a bit busy with work though, but I'll put these thoughts down soon =)

Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Entrepreneur III

Very fun so far, love the staggered chapters. Really enjoying seeing where you take this.

Author's Response: Thanks man, I'm enjoying writing too, kinda making up the storyline as I go along, but I gotta take a break for now.. Check back next week, I'm planning to have the stories converge somehow.. =)

Reviewer: Jude Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

wow, it's so good to read such kind reviews. I'm gonna put in a couple of chapters after this, I'm actually writing this stuff out as I go along, so hey, drop me some suggestions, I'm game for anything.

@zol: no worries man, I'll be keeping it micro for awhile in at least one of the storylines..

@Star Sage: hey man, thanks for the write up. I'm a fan, hope you enjoy the rest of my work..

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Afterparty III

Wow, another great chapter! You seem in a writing mood atm, keep going :p I can't wait for the next updates on the other chapters. I like the 99,x% ones more because of the unaware factor :p

Reviewer: Star Sage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

As a fan of unaware vore, I support this. I love what you've already setup here, as the world is interesting, and the characters introduced so far are very human. Here's hoping for some vore involving a sandwich or burger, but whatever the case, I will continue to read this as long as you'll keep writing.

Reviewer: Jude Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Thanks guys, yeah I loved reading the few unaware stories that are up here. I figured I'd contribute too, though I love a lot of different aspects, so I'm trying to incorporate as many different bits as possible. Things are about to change though, so far the party storyline has been aware giantess, but in the next few chapters I'll be switching to an unaware perspective while well...cant give away too many things huh? Hope you guys keep reading, I'll try to post up chapters regularly while my mind is still in these stories..

Reviewer: Knot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Love your style, incorporating various vignettes involving micro and unaware. I will echo Zol and say there are far too few stories like this on the site. Keep it up.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Very good story so far. Keep up the great work, there are far too little unaware stories up here, sadly.

Reviewer: Jude Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

thanks guys, I'll be putting up a continuation soon, but first, I've got another story to begin..as for the machine, more about it as the stories progress, but for now, it's a well known device used all over the world. Consider what life would be like if every home had a machine like this..

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack

Oh no, poor John. Hope Amanda finds him, soon without consuming him. Great story so far. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Ps does Amanda know of the machine or is it classified?

Aaron

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