[Report This]Date: July 08 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow this was the longest chapter so far, but it read so smoothly that you wouldnt have known it. well done. i really dont know what i can possibly add to make this an actual review.
so ill just say: spectacular.
aaron
(sorry lol) ps hope theres another slumber party coming.
Author's Response: No slumber party planned, but you never know...Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
[Reviewer shakes his head.]
Everytime Susie thinks like that, just the opposite happens. So, with her luck, chapter six will probably introduce a bunch of KKK-style would-be giant-killers!*
*Emphasis on "probably." ;-)
Author's Response: Oh no! Is the story really that predictable? (Yes, that was my idea for chapter six, well, I'm still going to write it, hope it turns out good) Thanks for the review! ;-)