Date: July 27 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the new chapter. The body-climbing and playful tasting scenarios are two of my favorites. Realy like her mischievous approach in this. Nice to see that Susie is finding acceptance in the town.
Author's Response: Thanks, great review! Your brilliant story, The Climb, was my inspiration for that part. (I'm still waiting for its sequel ;-) !
[Report This]Date: July 25 2010 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't improve on anything Aaron said. So, I'll just quote Abe Lincoln (from BILL AND TED'S EXCELLENT ADVENTURE).
"Party on, dudes!"
[Report This]Date: July 24 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
this chapter was terrific, and incredibly heart-warming...
i honestly dont really know what else to say... this tale has the most believably real characters and utterly astounding story-line that when i read this tale i almost feel as if im there along side jack, cheering on susie...
it is just exactly the kind of story that i love. well done.
aaron
ps(theres no ps) lol
Author's Response: Well, I guess praise doesn't come any better than this, lol. Thanks for another awesome review, it definitely looks like I've found my biggest fan.