Date: August 11 2013 12:10 AM Title: The Fall of a Queen
Awesome story, very easy to follow.
Date: January 03 2013 7:16 PM Title: The Fall of a Queen
great story i cant wait for more updates!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 9:14 AM Title: The Fall of a Queen
man was i shocked that poor maria died like that.. but you captured the emotions of the scene perfectly. glad that bitch kharlla was killed be merle an all the fighting parts were very action packed which kept me wanting more.
hopefully merle will get to finally take off her boots when she arrives at her friends village(an that if she doesnt have any polish on that trey would offer to help her out, im just saying)
anyways this story is beautifully written i especially loved how you described the scenery when trey an merle left the castle, an i also thought that the other humans had a natural reaction not to trust this queen at first but seemed to be warming up to her later.
at any rate this story is superb an i hope to see more of it.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, and your comments! There definitely is more to come very soon. I really want to hasten my progress on this story, especially since I've been slacking with it (and with writing in general, sadly).
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 8:04 AM Title: The Fall of a Queen
Wow! The exciting conclusion of this story is one of the best Xmas presents I've ever gotten from this site. Thanks for finally posting it. :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks. :) Though while this particular story arc is finished, the story itself is just getting started. ;)