Reviews For Earth's Cry
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2011 11:09 AM Title: Prologue & Escape

NOw, THAT is what I call an auspicious beginning! No way you'll ever succumb to George Lucas' Disease with this potential classic.

:-)

Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2010 2:21 PM Title: Prologue & Escape

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please ^^

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2010 7:00 AM Title: Prologue & Escape

wow great start. hope that you continue with this tale.

aaron

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2010 2:16 AM Title: Prologue & Escape

"iron fist" How about "iron foot"? That's an expression I've used before in a story. Just thought it would be more fitting. ;)

Also, I think you mention Trey as being a "she" once.

When are you going to be writing more? This is one of the few good stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the head's-up. I caught the error and will correct it.

I will be adding to this story very soon, but I also have other stories that are in dire need of an update. But I'll try not to make the wait too long. Glad you enjoyed it, though. :)

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