Reviews For Earth's Cry
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 7:56 AM Title: Showdown in Kharlla's Domain

Hey-hey! You delivered chapter 3 nineteen-and-a-half years sooner than George Lucas delivered the Prequel Trilogy. That, in itself, is worth five stars.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2011 6:32 AM Title: Showdown in Kharlla's Domain

I really like this story by the constant changing of the point of view is frustraiting because I'm getting immsered in one scene and then it suddenly changes.



Author's Response:

I apologize for the late reply, but I can see where you're coming from. I guess I was trying to evoke what many comics and TV shows do, but I imagine that it's harder to pull off in stories.

The next chapter has cut back on those quite a bit.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2011 9:42 PM Title: Showdown in Kharlla's Domain

glad to see this story again. love the battles an junk. great tale.

aaron

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