Date: December 30 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was interesting to read a story that captivated me in a nonerotic way! That's rare, here. The results were fantastic: I enjoyed reading and sympathizing with the giant girl who was marginalized by society. The writing itself is fantastic, though I did notice that you go from a narrative statement to a thought using commas, such as:
"No!" She sobbed, how many lives had she taken so far?
It was a fantastic 3 parter. Thank you for the excellent read!
Author's Response: Very welcome :D...thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another Brilliant chapter. I'd just like to mention that a bullet to the throat would surley kill her, especially on the inside. I didn't find that very believeable. That aside, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
It's good to see an island of quality in this sea of rubbish. What I mean is many stories can be read in either a minute or less or are more of a scene rather than a stories with a good plot.
Author's Response: Thanks for the response ^^ I'm glad you approve. And yeah there were a few physical realism slip ups...but my main focus here was on the emotional.
Date: December 19 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good detail on the growth. Can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: thanks ^^
[Report This]Date: December 13 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I cried a little when I read this. Good story. Favourated!
Author's Response: haha! thanks XD