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Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Your stories always impress. You have great talent. Hope you keep writing.



Author's Response:

hi its been such a long time since i visited thank you i really thought my stories would have ended up being deleted or put into that archive by now lol..i do enjoy writing down my desires wanting to eat a man play around with his body for sexual fulfillment has always been with me since child hood its just as strong now.The urge to write is still with me but my work takes so much out of me i am always to exhausted to put pen to paper.

I shall endevour to write down my cravings again ..just not sure when lol

 

Can i eat you please ..mm yumy for my tummy.

 

Amanda xxx

Reviewer: pabree Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

this jonathan character aint too smart by threatening her,especialy if he cant back it up. but here is an idea for his death... again... have you ever heard of a blood eagle? its were the vikings would take a prisoner and break open his ribs then pull the lungs outside of the rib cage



Author's Response:

mm interesting idea i shall do some research,i already have plans for the ring leader tho,i want him to suffer for his descration of her body and destroying her chances at a loving future.I feel the need to be very descriptive  when the "meat" meets his maker lol...

thank you for your comments and suggestion i am sure "man" has killed in many cruel ways through time,maybe i should research how woman have acted through the centuries maybe we are equally as versatile as you.

Amanda xx

Reviewer: pabree Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 12

and so the pot thickens lol :)



Author's Response:

A few more ingrediants are needed to make the food taste better PABTREE thank you one again xx

 

Amanda xx

Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 12 2011 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, I try to read it to find somethin golden, somethin to turn me on. Anyone who is after that usually keeps reading until they find what they're looking for. If it takes forever to find the part that turns me on and stimulates me, then it just does.



Author's Response:

Haaa i see you are a sadist lol...now i understand you a little better mmm be nice if you were here with me now if its a torturous end you seek then i would gladly give you one.

 

Amanda xx

Reviewer: pabree Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is more for blackguyj, but if you read carefully its about a woman with godlike powers to manipulate the world to her likeness. the men she is killing raped her and killed her boyfriend. they got a light sentence in their trial and now the woman is out to avenge her love. the twist is that she has a vore fetish, pretty noble in a grusome way i guess.

any way Amanda xx, even though the voilent sadistic stuff aint a turn on for me, I hope the little basterds get what they deserve in the end. I f some one did that to meI would be out for blood too.



Author's Response:

Thank you for trying to clarify whats been written  ...mm i drift a little lol girly thing i think i can be a little complicated at times and besides i did write some of the chapters when i was having my monthly lol.. altho i am not a wreck like some of my friends..as for the story ooh yes i do feel really mean at the moment not sure why really just...do xx

 

Amanda xx

Reviewer: blackguyj2009 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 11 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

This story making very little sense to me. I applaud the people that can understand it.



Author's Response:

In that case STOP READING IT why try and understand something that is meaningless to you??????????.......i'm sorry for being blunt what point are you trying to make???...if its beyond your conception of reality then read no more??...

 

Amanda xx

Reviewer: pabree Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow I should have waited, now this story makes perfect sense to me. good job on that last chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you Pabtree i want to involve the reader in the tale i am not a story teller but i do try and lead the reader into my inner self...i am mm mixed up on times lol.  girls perogetive i think lol...

 

Amanda xxx

PS thank you xx

Reviewer: pabree Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

the story is a little hard for me to follow but it was good for one of the many revenge stories on this site.  not my cup of tea but it was good.. so i didn't quite get why she was killing all these people or even how she got to be so big or them so small.



Author's Response:

Hello Pabtree i have already written her reasons,she was raped by them and they killed her childhood friend?...as for her changing size well it is a fantasy!!.... does there need to be a reason for everything? after all she has done some unusual things whilst digesting her intended victims??

 

...some of the tales on here are far more exorbitant than my simple tale...Samantha is many things but still a woman with a burning desire to be loved and love with out the need to desecrate anothers body to achieve her satisfaction a human heart beats within her you only ned find the key to unlock her love for you. 

 

Thank you for taking time to read my tale,its not yet complete...not every story written will appeal to us  but an open mind such has yours is a good place to start..thank you once again.

Amanda xx 

Reviewer: littleman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't think anyone can truelly say that once the sexual urge had been satisfied they would still like to go through with it!!! However, if it were possible there is no doubt I would give myself to you though, as even after my urges have been satisfied the urges always re-surface



Author's Response:

Mmm well littlemaid ..unusual choice of name?..

once my urge has been satisfied it does lie dormant for a while...but then i feel a man's urges are different ...i always want to eat you but it only becomes unbearable to me if i think about it tooo much...i have a very satisfying job therefore my mind is always focused on the task at hand...its my time alone when i feel the inner desire to feed on anothers pain torments my sexual desires...but littlemaid...you must understand my point of viewe tis i who would be eating you therefore i will feel only pleasure whilst your death feeds that desire burning away inside me..you on the other hand will be the one inside my body being digested alive.....i will feel no remorse for what i had done only pleasure fom it.

 

Amanda xx   

Reviewer: littleman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Should it not scare me more?? But the fact is it does not, as I want it to be possible



Author's Response:

mm interesting comment?..would being eaten alive and the emoitional responce over come the dread of the actual event occuring to you at the time..or would your survival instinct over come your desires  to be eaten alive ??????? mmmm intereseting scenario Littleman01........i feel that once your sexual  urges had been satisfied the brain would acknowledge the bodies impending death .... and the sheer terror of such a hopeless situation would be a horrific feeling for the victim....mmmm be nice for me tho lol...

 

Amanda xx.

Reviewer: littleman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hello Amanda, I love the story so far. Your words make the ordeal so desirable, can't wait to read the rest



Author's Response:

Thank you i was unsure if i should continue with this yarn...??.... i very often doubt my emotions...strange really i do get mixed up but my thoughts and needs end up dictating my feelings..i would eat from a man's body this i know...i think its a good thing that its not possible othr wise i would eat you alive..........it scares me some times......xx 

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Re: chapter 5...yet another inspiring piece that excels all others by way of its prose. Of course, the main theme remains the same as the others - yours as well - but the words you put into your work makes it so unique.  Do hope you continue, Amanda; it's so intriguing.  Well done that girl!



Author's Response:

Hello again Banfield sorry i have been slow in responding to your e-mails i have had a busy time here so my freedom has been compromised slightly but please be patient i shall reply to your comments....thank you for positive reviews i am ....intrigued  at the moment the story seems to change perspectives within my own minds eye....i am as you know governed by an inner urge to satisfy an age old desire to feed upon the males in our society.......curious really as to the real reason behind this passion i have to eat from the male sex.....lol

Amanda xx 

Reviewer: amanda Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

mmm i have been inspired once again again the story will get a little darker as it goes on hehe....and a maybe a bit more sexier ...as for not replying i shall banfield i just have not had time,i will give it my undevided attention laster on thank you for your words of encouragement think i'm a little low....time of the month i guess lol...xx

Amanda xx

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well, Amanda, you ought to continue regardless of your faults of grammar. It's intriguing. I found it good that the "predator" was so young, but then, in the 2nd part, she's suddenly much older. Never mind, as gentle though it be, it's definitely worth reading, and it's different.   BTW: I presume you don't wish to see the changes/additions I have made to your previous yarn - "Apple for the Teacher."   Ho-hum...

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