Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2016 1:16 AM Title: Day at the Pool

This is by far the best GTS story I ever read, it became my favorite for sure. I hope you cintinue it and add lots of more chapters :) But I wanted also say chapter 8 Day at the Pool was the best of irony, sarcasm, humiliation, it has the best parts. Not just had his crush literally became his ex, but she "shit on him" by txtting him in such ironic, twisted way if you consider him being stuck inside her ass and she reads it out loud, so damn amazing. The SMS part was the best of all chapters I have read, the chose of words, so damn good. The part of him felling so tiny and low when she read it loud and farted at the same time... The idea with the "bug in her ass" and her having an itch, I loved it. Of him runninginto a turd and her taking a shit and him getting splashed up again, so good. Of her wipe smearing him into her anus again which just passed fresh shit. Would love see these things again, especially these are totally the best parts of the chapter:

It made you wonder if you could ever face her again, if you ever made it out of here alive?

You heard Ashley speaking."You can kiss my ass!,"

She walked a short distance, once again. Her underwear dropped and she sat down. Your blood ran cold. Ashley released a powerful booty bomb, as the explosion rocketed you from her ass. You splashed into the water and resurfaced just in time to witness her ass gunk spewing down onto you. You heard her phone begin to beep. She was typing out a text. Soon she began to read it, out loud. "I saw you at the pool today. I wish you had come to talk to me, before leaving. This constant game with no finish makes me think... maybe we just shouldn't. Maybe you're meant to be a part of my past," she read. You shook your head and whispered "No..." She paused her reading and let an enormous fart. More slime spewed from above. You realized that last comment in her text was very ominous and made you pray that it was not foreshadowing something. "We had fun. I think we could have had even more fun, but at this point, I think it's just time for this to stop and for us to just move on," she continued. She was again interrupted with a loud fart. The gunk spewed like usual, but stopped abruptly. You choked on the smell and taste, but managed to look up. Her butthole appeared to be... plugged up? "Things get too hectic and stressful. I loved you, but with this shitty mess of a relationship, I don't think I could handle the shit hitting the fan," she finished. You hated her choice of wording. If you weren't already tiny, right now, you’d be feeling so very small. 
She stood up and you saw the white sheet approaching you. You waited to be crushed. Instead, it slid you up her butthole, as she wiped. Lovely. Inside of her ass with fresh shit.

Hope to see you having time again soon to write!! This chapter, this damn chapter, this story, just epic!!!

Reviewer: BigAl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2011 7:28 PM Title: Day at the Pool

Thanks for these stories, BootyPatrol!  I love butt stories so have thoroughly enjoyed your selection!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I've been wanting to see stuff like this, so I figured I'd try to write it myself.