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Reviewer: Boneguard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sip of Death

This chapter is another of my favories... becoming a part of a giantess. Being lower than her sweat... really cool !!! Beautiful. 



Author's Response:

This was one of my favorites to write. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 8: Sip of Death

Brilliant chapter even if I am pretty late in reviewing this story, would you consider doing a what-if Carly had grown into a towering giant after Jack sprayed her with some chemicals and she takes it out on him?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  I hadn't really considered doing something like that in the Blackmail stories, where the plot formula of the shrunken guy rather than the growing girl seemed to work best, but who knows, I am planning to bring these characters back eventually.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sip of Death

story of the year nomination from me!



Author's Response:

aww, you're makin' me blush :) in seriousness, thanks

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Sip of Death

That was awesome. The whole escape from the closet was really exciting. And jack realizing he had to drink sweat from his sister's sock to survive. I loved it. It had to be so degrading for him to realize that.

I'm starting to wonder if Jack should give in to Carly before she really does start to not care about him at all. I think I would have given in by now. But I guess if he did the story would end. I'm not quite ready for that yet. :-) Great job. Keep up the great writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the wad of five stars you keep giving me, bud.  i'm glad you enjoyed that chapter; it was one of my favorites to write, since i really wanted to try and use jack's solitude to let him try and reason out what to do, which i try to make sure i do on occasion throughout the story to keep the "human" connection there, but i of course had to make sure that his mini adventure ended a bit on the unfortunate side :)

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