Date: August 26 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 3: Comfort
Catherine's story reminds me of what Uther Pendragon did to people who used magic. He drove them out and didn't trust magic. Caroline's dad appears to share some aspects as Uther and I imagine that Caroline will have some similarites in her story with Arthur Pendragon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews on this, I enjoy hearing thoughts on older stories. It's an interesting perspective you have. I think you'll find it to be true to an extent, though with a few twists later on in the story.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Comfort
Wow. Love the emotion in this tale. Hope to read more.
Aaron
an lol the part where the doctor lifted up her massive bare foot to put his ear against it all I could think of was the seagull from Disney's little mermaid. Lol
Author's Response:
haha glad you like it. i was a little worried the emotion would be over the top, but then i was like oh what the hell, it's a fantasy story, it's part of the package
Date: May 24 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 3: Comfort
Good start. Gentle giantesses and fantasy stories are my bread and butter so I'm definitely liking this. The witch's entrance reminded me of Maleficent in "Sleeping Beauty." Curious to see how big Caroline will get. I'm also wondering why her father is a king but her mother is a duchess. Seems like there'd be a story there. Hmm...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And im sure there is a story there, it probably just wont appear in the story. The thinking on that was literally "duchess... Sure why not?" And good call on the sleeping beauty thing its definitely an influence there