Date: August 27 2013 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Procedure
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“A bit, perhaps, say… a matter inches?”
I believe you missed out the word: of
Author's Response:
Nice catch.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Procedure
I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter. I'm glad that you gave Caroline such a supportive family, things would certainly have been much more miserable for her without them. I'm also very curious to see how far her growing will go, and how she will have to adapt.
Well, that's that, all I can say now is keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 5: Procedure
love this light hearted uplifting tale. cant wait to see where it goes from here.
aaron
Author's Response:
I felt kinda bad after kicking the main character's ass in the other story, i thought why not make it so stuff actually doesn't suck horribly at all times in this one? i do intend to sort of integrate a more serious threat besides her simply getting humongous, but i'll still try to keep it in the somewhat lighthearted vein
[Report This]Date: May 26 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 5: Procedure
Well this isn't normally my kind of story. I do like your others better. But I decided to give this story a shot because I really like your writing.
I just finished reading the first 5 chapters and I found my self really enjoying it. I really like Caroline. keep up the good work.
Dave
Author's Response:
thansk for reading, I'm glad you were able to keep an open-mind