Reviews For Rise of a Princess
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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 18: Topple

Very good pace to the story. An the build up to her an Luke I killin me, lol.
I just love the overall aspect of this tale. Wéll done.

Aaron

Author's Response:

thanks, i figured the scenes involving her and Luke will be some of the most fun to write, so I've been trying to make sure I save some of the good stuff for later

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18: Topple

Cool confrontation with the kidnappers, and Phillip being tossed off the cliff was quite a dramatic moment. Glad Caroline was able to catch him.

By the way, don't worry about the Others. By no means does "Lost" have the trademark on that term. It was just the first thing I thought of.



Author's Response:

okay, cool.  i was guessing that was the case there, i was mostly just hoping people don't have some other image of the Others in my story from the show.  hopefully it's not a huge distraction to anyone

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