Date: June 10 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 10: CARY ME BACK TO OL' PRIME
I'm in a Timescribe story? How bizarre! I'm flattered and slightly confused. :P
You certainly have my fanboyish nitpickiness down and my love of mouthplay. I would never call your work drivel though. I hope I don't come across as a jerk in my reviews.
If I was going to be vored (is that a word?), that's probably not how I would have chosen it. But there are worse ways to go than eaten by Wonder Woman.
Speaking of nitpickiness (because ya knew it was coming), I believe Wally West's wife is named Linda, not Tina. And though Barry and Iris both died in the 80s...they got better.
Author's Response:
Actually, I was calling my work drivel as part of the comedy in the story.
The Tina I was referring to was Tina McGee in 1987 Flash series issues 3-14 or so (the older woman relationship, and drawn gorgeously too).
I did take a bit of license, and of course the whole thing was mainly written to give Carycomic (and hopefully you) a few laughs. Nothing jerky about your reviews. I just worked the reviews of my Jan 2010 piece Justice League: Wonders Within in for more gags.
I've had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm honoured that it drew your attention, and a review. Btw you're not permanently eaten. The moment Mxyzpixislicked (and I couldn't resist that name) returns to his own dimension, you should be back to normal as the fictional replacement Ryan Choi Atom outside Wonder Woman's stomach and back in your own duplex.
I hope this is good news. LOL.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: CARY ME BACK TO OL' PRIME
Excellent!!!
I especially liked the revamped Calorie Queen; the slight homage to Marvel's Ultimate version of Janet Pym; and your flattering theory about dimension-hopping Cary's ;-)
Author's Response:
And I even got a review from Pixis! Wow
But re the Janet Pym thing again I accomplished this by accident. I've never read of the Ultimate Version of Janet Pym. Can you tell me what comics she appeared in (and rough dates) and does this mean she ends up with growth power instead of being tiny?
And here's the big revelation. I haven't read LSH properly since 2009. I just made up Mite Eater Lass, having forgotten Calorie Queen altogether. I wish I'd had your memory, and she would have been the character I'd used, although I guess the Mite Eater Lass pun is good for comedy vore.