Date: August 12 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
That was a good twist with the crash, a very good story from the start, I love the family connection I think that makes it all the more intriguing, I would love to see a second follow up to this its just so gripping.
I would have liked to seen some more interaction between Anna and Tony but this is your story and you’ve done a great job, very well done.
I don’t know how you intend to finish this but I would love to see it with all the characters still alive, perhaps Kevin being tortured by Anna and Alison, on a daily basis for his crime.
I look forward to more stories from you, and thank you for a great read.
Author's Response:
glad you like it. i do have the ending planned out, and it's a bit different than what you've suggested, but i hope you enjoy it regardless. i hadn't considered a second one, but i guess if there was enough interest i might do one at some point
Date: August 07 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I didn't think you could top Carly in terms of viciousness but Alison is coming awfully close. Excellent stuff.
Author's Response:
hehe thanks; Carly's going to give Alison a run for her money now in the 3rd blackmail story ;)
Date: July 31 2011 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Am really loving this story, I would love to see one of them swallowed whole, perhaps when the girls dont get what they want.
Or maybe Allison pleasures herself with Ashley's Boyfriend infront of her. Or maybe even use her underwear to carry them around.
Author's Response:
i'm not much for insertion, so i hope you won't be disappointed there, but there may be more mouthplay later
Date: July 31 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Well what can i say i'm very impressed by your stories, this one is very good, i like the depth and the way its unfolding, if there was anything its pehaps that i would like a little more interaction between Kevin and Anna, a little more spice, its not a criticism you understand but personally i prefer the female - male interaction more but its a terrific story all the same but i'd like to see it sexed up just a little, but its very well done.
Author's Response:
perfectly understandable, the more extensive girl-girl interactions in this story were just me experimenting a bit, as what you've mentioned has been the center of my other stories. and sit tight, there will be some "sexing," as you say :)
Date: July 22 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Family reunion is an excellent story so far.I am about half way through and it is really well done.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response: thanks very much, glad you like it
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
A very good start.
Dave
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
Great story.
I know you said that you like long buildups and I like them.
But they at the same time killing me.
Author's Response:
stay tuned, the "meat" of the story is starting up here
[Report This]Date: June 30 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Financial Woes
I like what I'm seeing here and can see how the power structure in this family is shifting right before the victim's eyes (although it might not have dawned on some of them yet).
I hope you add frequently to this story as you definately have my attention.
Author's Response:
thanks; and i do update pretty frequently on stuff, so no prob there