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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest

Great chapter. If Kevin wont give in after all he's been through Maybe Anna needs to get rough and break a bone or something, Maybe a finger or an arm or a leg. Nothing fatal. To really hurt him she could do it to his wife or daughter and make him watch while she does it. You asked for thoughts. Those are my thoughts :-)

Dave



Author's Response: hehe you have predicted well, soon we'll see Anna try something a little meaner to get her point across

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest

Hope it does not end soon. Personally would like more feet. Would also like to see Stockholm syndrome take effect and they become almost if not willing to please. Just an opinon :P  Good stuff so far. Great writing. More patience than I have.

Reviewer: umad21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Close to the Chest

They need to step on one of them soon! :P Nice story!

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