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Reviewer: YAGS Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2008 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the content of the story, but you really need to learn to use quotation marks when people are talking. Also, the story says the boys are shrunk to 6 inches, but the tag on the story says it's a micro story (below 1 inch).

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