Date: March 07 2013 3:27 PM Title: The stage gets set
It was a nice chapter, although I felt that there was too much dialogue and not much description. I didn't really feel the emotion that was no doubt supposed to be there, especially towards the beginning of the chapter.
Author's Response:
your kinda right with the too much dialouge and less description but I feared that it would bore the readers even more out if I had added the details as well so I thought of leaving some out this time.
I mean sure does it add to the situation when you describe their facial expressions more or their surroundings a bit more but like I said was I worried that it woudl kill the interrest of the readers even more.
I try to make it better next time^^
[Report This]Date: February 27 2013 4:34 PM Title: The stage gets set
Da Fukk how have Ive not seen this story? Wht happened in ch. 3 shit went from peacefull to giant alien asskicking in seconds. Wht happened to sam and cathy? Personally I like this world u made. So many questions like why did the aliens invade? wht do they do with captured humans? why are the so sadistic?
Cant wait for u to update
Author's Response:
the next part will come soon with even more action in it ^^
Glad that you enjoyed it ^^