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Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice job Doorknob, please continue.

Reviewer: iki Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story!

Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 18 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Doorknob,

 

You clearly have a gift for keeping us at the edge of our seats. It was a well written story from the woman's prespective. We're all studiously waiting for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words girlfood. Your stories are one of the main reasons I got into writing these stories. Really glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Quite enjoyable, I like how you tried to incorporate a bit of light humor. It might have made it easier to release this as chapter 2 of your other story rather than a new one though

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! I might do that for the third part. Glad you enjoyed it!

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