Reviews For The Caretaker
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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 9:07 PM Title: Can't hold it in

holy crap... why would her friends want to play with them now? gross..
an when will jakes mother be making a heroic appearance an stop this wicked alaina? or will michelle have to sneak them outta this hell-hole somehow... oh well no point in guessing. ill just stay tuned.

aaron
ps good if not disturbing chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm planning on giving michelle the role of the hero, she'll be there soon I think

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2011 7:24 PM Title: Can't hold it in

Oh, I will SO applaud when she gets a dose of poetic justice!

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