Date: October 09 2011 2:51 PM Title: Relocation
Yrs I know, sorry, but I find it odd how someone would just strink out of the blue. Jake is small because of his genes if I'm not mistaken, but Nique is normal, if you will.
Author's Response:
you are mistaken, nique and jake were both shrunk by phalanx
Date: September 20 2011 8:08 AM Title: Relocation
very good story and excellent chapter! give feet to your people!! :P
[Report This]Date: August 04 2011 3:03 PM Title: Relocation
I'll disagree with Stubbornstain. I like that you got to the point. I think it would not be best if this turns into one of those long novels that never gets finished (I have one of those).
With the vore foreshadowing, I'm eagerly awaiting your next installment. :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you noticed, i'm a huge vore fan myself, but unfortunately it may take a little while to get there :/
Date: August 03 2011 3:48 PM Title: Relocation
Great start! I'm super excited to read more :)
Author's Response:
i'm glad to hear you like it, and I can't wait for YOUR next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 02 2011 8:59 AM Title: Relocation
Intriguing opener! Will there be a second chapter?
Author's Response:
there will, i just need to find some time
Date: August 01 2011 1:20 PM Title: Relocation
I think this is going to be a very good story but I don't like how most of back story is crammed into the summary and I felt chapter 1 could be developed a bit more. Perhaps having a prolouge might be a good idea? I don't tend to get on with prolouges myself but here I think one could work espcially since it can be told from a different perspective to the other chapters being a prolouge.