Reviews For The Caretaker
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2011 3:59 PM Title: Michelle

very good. i really like this story. keep it up.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2011 8:50 AM Title: Michelle

Hmmmmmm! I don't know whether to be relieved or disappointed that Jake wasn't discovered. But, I know I love the improvement in your sentence structures! Definitely more legible.

:-)

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.