Like your other story, the premise that you have here is both innovative and compelling. On the one hand, we have a protagonist that can really handle himself, a strong, witty fellow who presumably won't just roll over to a giantess's whims. Naturally, readers are excited to see how the inevitable "final battle" between Thornton and whichever girl develops into the main villain turns out. This is a breath of fresh air when compared to the typical dominant/submissive dynamic that comprises 99% of the stories here. (The only exception that comes immediately to mind is openhighhat's excellent story, Titan: Physics.) Beyond that, I must further compliment you on your characters. They definitely draw the reader into the story, particularly Thornton!

However, I do have a bit of criticism for that same aspect of your story. While your characters are quite interesting and diverse, they seem inappropriate for the setting: Harvard. While I never attended Harvard, my close friend happened to go there, and I've visited him on a number of occasions. Those experiences, and also a sort of peripheral understanding, have led me to believe that most showboating of any kind is shunned at that school, and at most other elite schools. It's viewed as tacky. Maybe my perspective is unique, and other readers wouldn't have objections. However, I do believe that it's important to write from a position of authority. As in, it's important to know your setting/background backwards and forwards, or, failing that, it's important to gloss over the parts that you don't know. I just feel like your characters, while they are undoubtedly compelling, probably wouldn't exist at Harvard. For instance, I guarantee you no one would care that Ashley was the head cheerleader. On the other hand, it's inevitable that whatever you write about will offend some "expert" somewhere, so I guess you'll have to try to strike a healthy balance. Let me just reiterate that in general it's good to write settings that you know intimately if they also happen to exist in real life; that way you won't alienate anyone and also might win a few extra fans.

If I could offer up an alternative to your setting, perhaps some sort of reality TV situation would be more appropriate. You could still have Thornton and Stephen be from Harvard, but the other characters could be farflung recruits auditioning for the trip of a lifetime. And perhaps the science geeks could be someone Thornton offended back at the university and are seeking revenge of some kind. That way the entertaining cattiness, etc. won't feel out of place. Just a thought.

Ultimately, this setting situation isn't a big problem. Characters are the most important part of any story, and you've got that covered in spades. Overall, this is a fantastic story that could use a few tweaks in the story, which I'm enjoying very much. I hope to see more of this story as well!

P.S. While the lack of macrophilia content doesn't bother me at all, I imagine that some of your other readers are itching to get to the good stuff (especially since your descriptions are so great). If you can somehow gracefully work that into the story sooner and more often, I'm sure you'll get a response from the readers. Balancing porn and story definitely isn't easy to do, but something tells me you've got the right stuff.

"Haha, well... how about this... if you write a second chapter to 'Kate's Detention', I'll write up the next chapter of Thornton Chronicles right now? Deal?"

Ahhh! I've been blackmailed! And by a fellow sm. Noooooo!

Haha, but in all seriousness, as much as a I appreciate you loving Kate's Detention enough for me to make a second chapter, that story is fully closed in my opinion. If anyone would ever want to make a sequel to it and just credit me for the first one, I'd be perfectly okay with that, but I personally have no creative ideas to go any further with it. To me, it was always a short story, not a multi-chapter epic like Change Happens.

Plus, I have so many other creative stories I want to do. I've recently written 2 comics for giantessfan, neither one of which they seem to be interested in making, so I'll probably be posting those here soon. I also recently completed a new chapter for Freshman Giantess and have several stories and collages I'm working on.

So, there is no future for Kate's Detention unless someone else wants to pen it. It's finished. Thornton's Chronicles on the other hand feels as though it's just beginning, and I hope you've thought about how it's going to end, because with all the unfinished stories on here and all the leg work you've provided for these characters, I would be sad to not see the payoff and close like every good story. There's so much character depth, conflicting relationships, I mean, this story is going to be fan-fucking-tastic by the time we see others start to shrink.

Haha, if only you would have said another chapter for Freshman Giantess or for me to finish the epilogue for Change Happens. I would have jumped on that and been like DEAL!

So glad this story is back! Keep going! Don't stop!

i have to say that i am really enjoying this. one of my favorite stories just finished and so i have been looking for a new one to read and BINGO, here it is. your character developement and dialogue and amazing and i love your giantes content. please continue and never stop =)

I'm glad to see the story has started back up, but I feel like it's lost some since you last left it. When I read this and the part where Alisha was imaging Thorton between her buttcheeks, I was so ready for some shrinking action, but now we've dived back into the plot. Plot is super important, don't get me wrong, but this far into the story you need to keep the shrunken play alive, even if it's only through imagination. I felt like you missed a good opportunity by not going into detail when Alisha thinks about keeping the teacher in her panties once she found her, or Alisha imagining what Eliza's reaction will be when Thornton's between her buttcheeks, or Eliza worrying what Alisha might do to Thornton if she does shrink him. Even just a paragraph about the shrinking I feel would have given the chapter more balance, or if you had made it even longer to where one of the girls finds the teacher. I wouldn't be saying this, but you had two chapters in a row missing that element, and in this point in the story, it always needs to be there, even if it's just a little bit.

I also am not a very big fan of the shrunken teacher. I'd much rather see Thornton, Ashley, or any of their friends shrunken. That could solely just be me though.

This is my first time reading this, and I'm sad I never caught it when you first started adding chapters. I love how you didn't just immediately jump into the shrinking, but let the girls fantasize about what they want to do to the shrunken people. I wish it was a little more descriptive, but maybe you're just waiting for everyone to shrink before you do multiple paragraphs describing scenarios of something like a shrunken Ashley puckering up to Eliza's giant ass.

I also enjoy that there's a variety of characters and am curious as to what's going to happen to all of them. There's a various of combinations you could do, and you have me wondering what they'll be. Like, will the "Barbie Bunch" get shrunken, or did you bring up Sarah's ass being popular with the guys because you wanted Sarah to discover her ass is actually quite unpopular with shrunken guys? Will Alisha get to make her dream of having Thornton squirm between her ass cheeks become a reality, or will Eliza's feelings get in the way? So many questions! Can't wait to read the answers with each new chapter!

Great story so far! Would love to see some feet/sock action. Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Should be Chapter 9 or 10.

Glad that you're enjoying it. Thanks for the high rating! 

I registered for the sole purpose of asking you to please keep writing. It is a great story and there hasn't even been any GTS content yet. Great work.

Hey! You seem to like reviews, so I thought I'ld leave you one. I like the setting, and the dialogue is a higher standard than  we typically get. If I were to recommend anything, I would not introduce any more characters, because I don't really know who everyone is.

Keep up the great work!

Roar! I'm back with a review for your story this time. Great start youv'e really set up the scene well and use great dialogue and description. I can't wait to see where the set up goes :P

I can also see how you like your butt crush to should help me ! *ninjas ideas* :P