[Report This]Date: April 02 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
Oh my, who should Peter trust? I know I have some catching-up to do, but I wanted to pop in to tell you I enjoyed this chapter in particular. I find it representative of some of the things I've enjoyed about the story in general. You've commended me before on my restraint. Let me just say that Peter's interactions with Ms. Tritter are just heavenly, exemplars of the power of subtlety.
Sharon I find interestingly complex. Mandy is her foil as the unpredictable, genuinely scary one. Sharon is still threatening, but somehow less so. Even endearing, in an odd way. I'm hoping she's sincere, and turns into the friend who gets Peter to take some fun risks. In any case, I trust the 'smith to weave an engrossing tale, and look forward to following Peter's high school haps.
Author's Response:
Good to see ya back on the site. I'm glad to hear you like the quieter moments of this story. Those are often some of my favorite parts of this genre. Thanks for reviewing
Date: January 27 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
From Ms. Tritter to Sharon; like going from the afternoon sun in July to a December moonrise. Work those capillaries, Peter!
Author's Response:
It's definitely an extreme turnaround.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
Wow intense moment there. Sharon is pretty manipulative and kind of bossy. Which is good since it adds drama.
Glad this story is back. I was surprised to see it updated, I thought it disappeared forever.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I know I tend to take long breaks on this one but I have no intentions of abandoning it forever.
Date: January 26 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
This is a great story!. Surprised I didn't discover it sooner!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's probably because I hadn't updated this one in almost a year.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
It sounds like Sharon is already to trying to make him her isolated toy-boy.
Author's Response:
Sharon's definitely already got something cooking.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 21: Vixen Advice
Really liking Ms.Tritter so far! She seems like a reasonble, intelligent young woman, and beautiful to boot! I can't wait to get more of her!
Sharon on the other hand probably wants Peter like a little girl wants a gerbil; a tiny, portable pet...I get the impression she doesn't see Peter as a tiny human pursuing his dreams.
Great chapter, this and Julia are my favorite of your stories, maybe I like this a bit better since it's more gentle and I'm biased towards that.
Author's Response:
Tritter is definitely the closest teacher to a friend that Peter will have in this story. And may be onto something with Sharon. Thanks for reading!