“We’re real pleased you ate the O’Grady gang Carla?” said the My Pa says they’re awful folk. They shot up our town and even made Mr. Crabb give over his whiskey. I don’t care ‘bout that part much. Mr. Crabb’s awful mean!”

This line doesn't make sense, especially this sentence: said the My Pa says they’re awful folk. I think you mean said the boy, and then add in another speech mark.