Reviewer: F_G_F Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Another good chapter.  I think the only thing that would have made this better is if the narrator would have referred to the DCI by name throughout.  I understand that the narrator is her subordinate so it would be unlikely for her to refer to her boss by name, but I think that it would have made this chapter more personal and therefore more sensual.

That's such a little thing though.  I am thoroughly enjoying this story.  You continue to impress.

Author's Response:

I think you're right about using the DCI's name - I shall edit it accordingly. Thank you for the lovely feedback. xxx